More thoughts on Bar Fight at the Prop:
---- More details. Don't just jump into the action - describe the place in a couple more words; describe the evening, describe the dorm? Where did we come from.
---- The dialogue can be approximated. (I certainly don't remember all of it after three years.) The action should be as close to how I remember it as I can.
---- Suspense?
---- Conclusion. It ended in a silly argument - how to fit that in?
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